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本周大作文预测新鲜出炉🔥 可参考日期:10月25日-31日

作文预测
2024-10-25

1. 题目及其大意

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes, what are the causes? How should these young criminals to be punished?

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2. 思路提纲

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3. 高分范文示例

Recently, more and more criminal cases reported by the media involve youngsters. This phenomenon is caused by various factors, and despite their age, they should still be punished appropriately.

 

As for the causes, several are to blame. Firstly, the lack of parental supervision is the most significant reason. In contemporary society, many parents are usually occupied with their work. In fact, they even work on the weekends, leaving less time for playing with children or eating dinner with their teenage sons and daughters. Because of these, those youngsters are not taught the difference between right and wrong, so they end up stealing, doing drugs, drinking, or bullying. Another cause of juvenile delinquency is the advent of technology. Social media, in particular, normalize violence among many children and teenagers. As an example, there are role-playing online games that teach young people to plan crimes, hold a gun, kill people, and so on. The activities desensitize young minds to violence, making them criminals in the end.

 

Nevertheless, even though the youth can be lawbreakers, suitable punishments must be adopted. Mainly, parents should impose non-corporal penalties on their young ones who carry out certain crimes. These include confiscating their electronic devices, assigning them more household chores, reducing their allowance, or prohibiting them from playing outdoors. In addition, the community should also be involved in giving sanctions to minors. A good case in point is unpaid community service. This can not only lessen children and teenagers’ gadget time, but also teach them good morals and a sense of responsibility.

 

In conclusion, technology and lack of good parenting are primarily behind juvenile crimes. In order to prevent young offenders from becoming fully mature criminals, punishments should be administered collaboratively by parents and communities.  

 

4. 高分词汇或表达

(1) despite their age 尽管他们的年龄

(2) several are to blame 有几个要负责

(3) lack of parental supervision 缺乏父母的监督

(4) In contemporary society 在当代社会

(5) teenage sons and daughters 青少年的儿女

(6) juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

(7) end up 最终

(8) advent of technology 技术的出现

(9) carry out 执行

(10) are not taught the difference between right and wrong 没有被教导是非对错

(11) role-playing online games 角色扮演在线游戏

(12) desensitize young minds to violence 使年轻人对暴力脱敏

(13) lawbreakers 违法者

(14) impose non-corporal penalties 施加非体罚

(15) confiscating their electronic devices 没收他们的电子设备

(16) sanctions 制裁

(17) unpaid community services 无偿社区服务

(18) in particular 特别是

(19) normalize violence 正常化暴力

(20) As an example 例如

(21) primarily behind juvenile crimes 主要导致青少年犯罪

(22) young offenders 年轻的罪犯

(23) collaboratively 合作地

(24) assigning 分配

(25) prohibiting 禁止

(26) A good case in point is 一个很好的例子是

(27) gadget time 电子设备时间

(28) good morals 良好的道德

(29) sense of responsibility 责任感

1. 题目及其大意

Some people think the best way to solve traffic congestion in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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2. 思路提纲

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3. 高分范文示例

As the issue of road congestion worsens day by day, more and more individuals are suggesting unlimited, no-charge public transportation as the most ideal solution. I partially agree with this notion based on the following reasons.

On the one hand, I will never deny that once public transport is offered for free 24 hours a day, seven days a week, citizens will highly be encouraged to leave their cars at home. Instead, they may opt for a more suitable mode of transport. With the decrease in the number of private cars on the road, traffic jams will be placed at a minimum. To illustrate further, an average bus carries between 30 and 100 passengers. This means that approximately 15 to 50 private vehicles will not be driven on a daily basis, and that is for one bus alone.  

On the other hand, I also find it true that other people still place higher regard on convenience than cost, manifesting that free transport is not always effective in reducing traffic. Businessmen, in particular, are less likely to take a subway to get to and from the office just to save money. Similarly, a mother of three primary school students may prioritize a convenient and air-conditioned ride through their own car over a crowded metro. Hence, due to people’s preferences, let alone their high income, free transportation would not address traffic congestion that much.

In conclusion, although saving money is attractive for some commuters, others value comfort more than price. Thus, I partly concur with the stance that no-cost public transport ride tackles congestion on roads.

4. 高分词汇或表达

(1) As the issue on road congestion worsens day by day随着道路拥堵问题日益恶化

(2) Unlimited无限

(3) no-charge public transportation免费公共交通 

(4) I partially agree with this notion我部分同意这个想法

(5) I will never deny that我永远不会否认这一点

(6) traffic jam 交通堵塞

(7) be placed at a minimum最低限度

(8) convenient and air-conditioned ride方便且带空调的交通工具

(9) To illustrate further为了进一步说明

(10) I also find it true 我也觉得的确

(11) manifesting 体现

(12) due to people’s preference由于人们的喜好

(13) others value comfort than price其他人看重舒适而不是价格

(14) I partly concur with the stance 我部分同意这一立场

(15) no-cost public transport ride tackles congestion on roads免费乘坐公共交通工具解决道路拥堵问题

1、题目及其大意

Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between counties as a positive development. Others, However, feel these lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

 

2、思路提纲

 

3、高分范文示例


The rapidly growing commercial and cultural exchange between different nations

brings significant benefits to individuals and society. However, others claim that it

only results in the disappearance of our national distinction. I think both sides are

sensible.

On the one hand, it is true that the escalation of trade and cultural activities among

countries brings about certain advantages. Firstly, thanks to the increasing cultural

contact, we now have access to new cultures that bring us much joy. For example,

even without having to travel abroad, we can easily eat foreign food, watch a foreign

movie, or wear western clothes. Secondly, with speedy business contact among

nations, the standard of living in developing nations has seen improvements. For

instance, studies show that numerous job opportunities have been created due to

increasing business exchanges. More specifically, international companies put up

offices and branches in other regions, particularly developing ones, helping address

their high unemployment rate.

On the other hand, it cannot be denied that the above activities also lead to the loss of

national identities. Primarily, some long-established traditional cultures have already

been lost. In Cambodia, as a good case in point, some of their local food has been

forgotten due to the popularization of international food such as hamburgers and pizza.

In addition, we have also seen decreased use of traditional clothing, which is also

associated with our national identity. To exemplify, in the Philippines, the sale and

wearing of traditional clothes like baro’t saya went down, while foreign brands like

Chanel or Louis Vuitton increased.

In conclusion, I concur that both views are acceptable. Nevertheless, we have to

urgently deal with the loss of our unique identity due to globalization before it is

entirely forgotten.

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4、高分词汇或表达

(1) rapidly growing快速增

(2) commercial and cultural exchange 业和文化交

(3) disappearance of our national distinction们民族区别的消

(4) I think both sides are sensible认为双方都是明智

(5) escalation of trade and cultural activities 贸易和文化活动升级

(6) thanks to the increasing cultural contact由于文化接触的增加

(7) speedy business contact   快速业务联

(8) standard of living生活水平

(9) due to increasing business exchanges由于业务交流的增

(10) helping address their high unemployment rate帮助解决高失业率问题

(11) some long-established traditional cultures 一些历史悠久的传统文

(12) decreased use of traditional clothing减少了对传统服装的使用

(13) be associated with  …联系在一起;与…有关

(14) national identity民族

(15) popularization of international food 际食品的普

(16) as a good case in point为一个很好的例

(17) to exemplify

(18) I concur that 我同意

(19) urgently deal紧急处